The Kindle Re-read Project

In addition to working on PbN Act Three, I've also begun converting the text of VbN into PDF to read on my Kindle. It's interesting to read through the story like it's an actual book. I've gotten through Act Two so far and I'm enjoying it, but I have noticed a few things...

• More than a few spelling and grammar errors, but not as many as I expected.
• Pretty much every African-American character that appears "on-screen", major or minor, is half-white. I had forgotten Boar is such, but so too is the big basketball player Rebecca tries to pick up the night she's discovered by Deborah and so is little Matthew (Leigh's son). Probably need to remedy this at some point. I'm not sure I like the statement it makes.
• Act Two feels more problematic than I remember it. I know where it comes from. Act Two was really an effort in avoiding things-happen-because-the-plot-demands-that-they happen and it was not entirely successful. I'm not sure what, if anything, I can do about that without a major rewrite (Something at this point, I'm not keen on doing while I'm working on PbN.)
• Overall, I can see my writing style evolve chapter by chapter. That's kinda cool.