I've been working on chapters for Act Four in what little spare time I have. One of the things that keeps popping up is that I have to explain some aspect of vampire society, some element of the VTR universe, and it occurred to me that I shouldn't be introducing standard elements of the universe that late in the story.
So I'm going back through Act One and making some edits to put these explanations where they belong in the context of Michael's own introduction to his new world. Along the way, I'm finding a number of plot holes and errors that needed correcting (For instance, Andreas at one point tells Michael the Mad Bishop is from Richmond instead of Lynchburg.)
So, if you've already read Act One, there are a few changes here and there. Hopefully the story will flow a little more smoothly now.
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